I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Keah, I really like your work how it has some photos of evidence that you made them. I also Love the fact that you have got lots of colour in your piece of your work. Maybe next time you could fix some spelling mistakes. Good Job Keah :)
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do make sore you lock for spelling mistakes because like the word smoothie instead you put smodey
ReplyDeleteHey Keah, I really like your work how it has some photos of evidence that you made them. I also Love the fact that you have got lots of colour in your piece of your work. Maybe next time you could fix some spelling mistakes. Good Job Keah :)
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