I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Keah I really like your hokey pokey work i also did one too and i liked the steps, and i like the words you put in your sentences. Your work is very good by the punctuation that you put, Bye
great job Keah well done on your explanation you used precise words and you did the recipe right and all the steps.It really helped me when I made hokey pokey at my house I used your recipe and steps and it worked perfectly.
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Hi Keah
ReplyDeleteI really like your hokey pokey work i also did one too and i liked the steps, and i like the words you put in your sentences. Your work is very good by the punctuation that you put, Bye
-Erin
thanks erin your so nice
Deletegreat job Keah well done on your explanation you used precise words and you did the recipe right and all the steps.It really helped me when I made hokey pokey at my house I used your recipe and steps and it worked perfectly.
ReplyDeletethanks mikayla what so you yost lis list waill if you did thats so cool
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