I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 15 May 2019
How to make your parents give you what you want
for a few days my literacy class and I have been writing steps about how to something mine was how to get your parents to give you what you want i had fun making this i found it hard to think off what to writ i found it easy to writ it down anyway i hope you like it.
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Hi Keah I love your blog post. it reminds me when I had to write something like this. maybe next time you could tell us why you had to do this blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi Keah I love the amount of humor you have in your writing.Maybe next time you could make your picture a bit bigger because I had to zoom in when I tried to read it. It was a great piece of writing for me to read.This reminds me of when I tried to get my parents to say yes to something that I would like but then I got surprised for my birthday. next time you could re read to make sure it makes sense because some words are missing a letter.
ReplyDeleteHi Keah. HAAAA I love it and how you add step by step. But i do not think that will work on my parents. Next time you can re read your writing and blog post to make shore you are not missing word and I think I saw a couple couple lowercase I. But from there it is good. See you at school.
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