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Wednesday 15 May 2019

How to make your parents give you what you want

for a few days my literacy class and I have been writing steps about how to something mine was how to get your parents to give you what you want i had fun making this i found it hard to think off what to writ i found it easy to writ it down anyway i hope you like it.


3 comments:

  1. Hi Keah I love your blog post. it reminds me when I had to write something like this. maybe next time you could tell us why you had to do this blog post.

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  2. Hi Keah I love the amount of humor you have in your writing.Maybe next time you could make your picture a bit bigger because I had to zoom in when I tried to read it. It was a great piece of writing for me to read.This reminds me of when I tried to get my parents to say yes to something that I would like but then I got surprised for my birthday. next time you could re read to make sure it makes sense because some words are missing a letter.

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  3. Hi Keah. HAAAA I love it and how you add step by step. But i do not think that will work on my parents. Next time you can re read your writing and blog post to make shore you are not missing word and I think I saw a couple couple lowercase I. But from there it is good. See you at school.

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