I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For hur 1 we have been learning about the gold rush. Today we had to do a DLO about it and had to put facts down. I added pictures that represent the facts like who the first person to find gold was and I'd add a picture off a person with gold.
You put really good information on your slides, It was put together really well and you described what you were doing really well in the blurb. And you included 6 regions where gold was found in NZ.
You've provided some worthwhile facts Keah. I like your inclusion of Charles Ring and his discovery..with a name like that, he'd have to find gold!:-). Always room for more info. when you do these tasks relating to the Gold Rush.
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You put really good information on your slides, It was put together really well and you described what you were doing really well in the blurb. And you included 6 regions where gold was found in NZ.
ReplyDeleteYou've provided some worthwhile facts Keah. I like your inclusion of Charles Ring and his discovery..with a name like that, he'd have to find gold!:-). Always room for more info. when you do these tasks relating to the Gold Rush.
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