I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
at cibersmart we have been doing qwolty blog comment and this is mine i made mine about horse i found it hard to make a plasce for it at i found it esy to do the comments
Well Done Keah I loved It A lot. I love The Cute Animals You Choose. maybe Next Time You Could Get Some Of The Spelling Correct because I could Not Read Some Spelling . I Loved making This With You. Go Check out My Quality Blog Post Comment Thing On My Blog Here ... http://shsharmonyr.blogspot.com/
Hi Keah I like your animation it is really cool how you have the animals and you have done the comment on a phone. Next time you could change some of the spelling and next time you could add more in of How to make a quality blog comment because you just told us what it has to have but now really how to. But otherwise I like what you have done.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Well Done Keah I loved It A lot. I love The Cute Animals You Choose. maybe Next Time You Could Get Some Of The Spelling Correct because I could Not Read Some Spelling . I Loved making This With You. Go Check out My Quality Blog Post Comment Thing On My Blog Here ... http://shsharmonyr.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteok thank and i think i did
DeleteWhooops I mean when I made the other one With you .
DeleteHi Keah I like how you used the animals horses and you how you make your own comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Keah I like your animation it is really cool how you have the animals and you have done the comment on a phone.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could change some of the spelling and next time you could add more in of How to make a quality blog comment because you just told us what it has to have but now really how to. But otherwise I like what you have done.