for writing we have been writing a story about a world without wheels. My story is about a girl who is on the poor side but is trying to make at least a little bit of her mums dream come true. At first I didn't know what to write but then i came up with an idea that I liked. I liked writing this story because I got to be creative with what I writ. Here's my story.
Only For The Rich
There are two sides to this world the rich or the poor there was no middle, you just had to be either rich or poor. One main thing that had a difference between them was wheels the rich had them and the poor didn't my family is on the poor side so we can't afford many things but I don't care.
One morning when I woke up no one was home. My parents were out walking to the supermarket and using the rest of the money they had.
Parents point of view:
When walking down to the supermarket we can see the carriages going past while we walk.
“I wish I had the money to get that.” I said in my head
Me again:
Once my parents got home they went to their room to go to sleep because they hadn’t got any the night before. That night,I felt bad. Once I was done putting away the food, I went to my room to make something. I knew that my mum wanted a carriage, So I thought of ways to make her dream come true.
The next day I made my way to school and saw a lot of scraps on the ground. I had an idea.
When I got back from school I went over to the scraps and took some. I went home and got my paint and paper out. You see the thing is I don't have the stuff to make a carriage and I never will so I got a few things that were of one and stuck them on the painting. I realised that I got a piece of the wheel which is the part that made them expensive and hard to get. I hate it that the world had to be divided.
On the day of my mum's birthday I wrapped her present with the most pretty wrapping paper ever and ran to her room and placed it onto her bedside table for when she woke up.
While my parents were asleep I went to my room and got ready for school. My mum woke up a few seconds later and I could hear her opening her present up. A few minutes later she ran to my room and gave me a hug and said that it's one of the best presents she ever had.
While walking to school I started feeling tired but I just walked it off and kept going. While I was at school it was getting worse and I felt like I was sick so I went to the nurses office and they sent me home. When I was at home I just went to sleep because I was so tired.
The End
