I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi keah i'm Mikayla I really like your writing I think that it is really interesting it really hooked me in when I red it also it was a bit hard to read it so maybe next time you could try to make it a bit more readable.
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Hi keah i'm Mikayla I really like your writing I think that it is really interesting it really hooked me in when I red it also it was a bit hard to read it so maybe next time you could try to make it a bit more readable.
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