I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
for literacy my group and I had to make a thing that said save Pluto or something
else like that my buddy was Teagen i found this kinda fun i found it hard to agree with the colour i found it easy to think of what we where going to put as the words here it is.
Hey Keah its Hollie, I really like your poster :) I like the planets you made, But for your blurb you need to reread it because there is alot of i that are not capital and some sentences don't make sense. But otherwise I think your blog post was good.
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Hey Keah its Hollie, I really like your poster :) I like the planets you made, But for your blurb you need to reread it because there is alot of i that are not capital and some sentences don't make sense. But otherwise I think your blog post was good.
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