in writing we had to writ about the landing on the moon we have lernt alot about it we had to wsrit the story like we where whaching it or we where him i was writing it like i was waching it with my family i found it hard to think of what wode be hapininhg well wee where whaching it i found it easy to think about what was happenig on the TV and the start of the story.
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